Check of a Page About Python

[Anastasios Hatzis]

Hi

I have set up a page for a project on SourceForge. This project is about
a bundled tech platform, which contains Python (among other OSS tools),
so I also included a page with regard to Python. Indeed my English isn't
that good, thus the information given on this page really needs a check-up.

I would be very happy, if someone has the time and willingness to read
this page (English, orthographical, and textual). The URL is:

http://freegee.sourceforge.net/FG_EN/products/freegee/modules/python_html.html

There are also Python related information on some other web
pages/documents of the project, but they are just abstracts/copies of
this page.

Many thanks!

Anastasios

 

[Eric Williams]

Hallo,

Looks alright, but I'd be interested to know why you designate python a 4GL?
You might want to check your jargon lexicon on that one.

cya,
Eric

 

[G.A.]

Indeed my English isn't
that good, thus the information given on this page really needs a check-up.

Your English looks pretty good to me.

In the third sentence beginning "Many features, " there should be no comma
after "features".

In the same sentence,"exchangeble" needs an e after the g.

First sentence, second paragraph, delete the word "especially."

Second sentence, instead of "... as well as ...", split it into two
sentences by ending the first part at "calls and libraries." The the
second part could be "In addition, new modules are easily written in C or
C++."

In the bullet list, Syntax and Variety should be lower case.

Most of these are the sort of typos that even native speakers make.

Gary

 

[Anastasios Hatzis]

Hello

yeah, good question. First it has been 'scripting language', but it
seems that there is something missing. But I guess by '4GL' it's gone
worse. Any suggestion?

cu
Anastasios

 

[Anastasios Hatzis]

Hello

yeah, good question. First it has been 'scripting language', but it
seems that there is something missing. But I guess by '4GL' it's gone
worse. Any suggestion?

cu
Anastasios

 

[Christos TZOTZIOY Georgiou]

Xaire Anastasie.

Looks alright, but I'd be interested to know why you designate python a 4GL?
You might want to check your jargon lexicon on that one.

Yep. If you want to improvise, change 4GL into NGL (for next generation
language 4GL was a term coined for higher level languages tied to a
specific domain, AFAIK SQL servers. It's not trendy anymore

'Scripting language' is OK, since this is what Python will be used for
in FreeGee.

 

[Anastasios Hatzis]

Eric, Gary

many thanks for your proof read and comments. You helped very much! I
converged the description stronger to the official version
('interpreted, OO programming language ...'), using 'scripting' in the
menue bar because of too little space there.

Anastasios

 

[Anastasios Hatzis]

Eric, Gary

many thanks for your proof read and comments. You helped very much! I
converged the description stronger to the official version
('interpreted, OO programming language ...'), using 'scripting' in the
menue bar because of too little space there.

Anastasios

 

[Anastasios Hatzis]

Eric, Gary

many thanks for your proof read and comments. You helped very much! I
converged the description stronger to the official version
('interpreted, OO programming language ...'), using 'scripting' in the
menue bar because of too little space there.

Anastasios