my link , please help

[NomadicWorker]

http://www.strikelinetravel.x10hosting.com/Newfoundland-Main.html

can someone please take a look at the above link and let me know if i
can do anything better with the text.


Thanks

 

[Adrienne Boswell]

Gazing into my crystal ball I observed NomadicWorker

http://www.strikelinetravel.x10hosting.com/Newfoundland-Main.html

can someone please take a look at the above link and let me know if i
can do anything better with the text.


Thanks

This really belongs in alt.html.critique - cross posted and follow-ups set.

 

[Neredbojias]

http://www.strikelinetravel.x10hosting.com/Newfoundland-Main.html

can someone please take a look at the above link and let me know if i
can do anything better with the text.

God, I hope so. Right now no one can read it. (Hint: change the color
and make it bigger.)

 

[Ari Heino]

Neredbojias kirjoitti seuraavasti:

God, I hope so. Right now no one can read it. (Hint: change the color
and make it bigger.)

Indeed.
BTW, the whole site looks "funny" when images are disabled!
DON'T USE IMAGES AS TEXT!!! At least with no alt texts whatsoever.

It seems to be yet another example of this Photosop slice'n'dice lunacy.

 

[Neredbojias]

Neredbojias kirjoitti seuraavasti:

Indeed.
BTW, the whole site looks "funny" when images are disabled!
DON'T USE IMAGES AS TEXT!!! At least with no alt texts whatsoever.

It seems to be yet another example of this Photosop slice'n'dice
lunacy.

Very likely. I didn't do a "view-source" and now the page seems to be
down. Maybe the OP's reworking it but I sense this is a case of
lack-of-experience.

 

[Ari Heino]

Neredbojias kirjoitti seuraavasti:

Very likely.

Based on this line
<!-- ImageReady Slices (Newfoundland Main.psd) -->
It _is_ very likely.

 

[Neredbojias]

Neredbojias kirjoitti seuraavasti:

Based on this line
<!-- ImageReady Slices (Newfoundland Main.psd) -->
It _is_ very likely.

Alas, another poor soul suckered-in by the corporate demigogs. It's
times like these I really miss ms-dos and CompuShow.

 

[Ari Heino]

Neredbojias kirjoitti seuraavasti:

Alas, another poor soul suckered-in by the corporate demigogs. It's
times like these I really miss ms-dos and CompuShow.

And how much easier this site could be done with a couple of background
images and proper text and lists! No tables needed either.

 

[Travis Newbury]

can someone please take a look at the above link and let me know if i
can do anything better with the text?

Don't use black on blue
Put some margins on the test so it does not hit right up against the
white bar.
Larger font size

 

[Neredbojias]

Neredbojias kirjoitti seuraavasti:

And how much easier this site could be done with a couple of
background images and proper text and lists! No tables needed either.

Certainly. Apparently the text color is the browser default although I
didn't recognize it with that particular bgcolor. I was amazed to see
that it's at least a draft for a commercial site and design-copywrited
(supposedly) by some company. Newfoundland is more rustic than I
thought.