Please correct my mistake in my English letter

J

jong4gorgon

Dear Mrs Gorgons,
It has been over ten years since we met and worked together in the
farm. As you might know, my wife just went away unexpectedly on a
winter day. My heart had become from so much cold to even cruel to
many warm hearts around since then. But lately, I have found myself
unable to escape from the sunlights sparked from a colleague's eyes.
They keep me always warm in these rainy days. I find myself more
interested in the work when she is around. She seems to have lightened
up a new light in my heart, the fire of hope, of love, of strength for
me to keep going to the rest of my life. I am not young to express my
love like when I was with my first love, without any denial, I also
miss my wife from time to time, and it was already a beautiful
memorable one anyway. But I can't help admitting the colleague I
mentioned was you that came and kept away all the shadows of
loneliness. I was afraid sometimes that these words of mine could
upset you and if they did, I truly appologize. But without you, the
rest of my life is just a wreck.

With sincerity and all from the bottom of my lonely heart

Jong
 
J

Jeff

Dear Mrs Gorgons,
It has been over ten years since we met and worked together in the
farm. As you might know, my wife just went away unexpectedly on a
winter day. My heart had become from so much cold to even cruel to
many warm hearts around since then. But lately, I have found myself
unable to escape from the sunlights sparked from a colleague's eyes.
They keep me always warm in these rainy days. I find myself more
interested in the work when she is around. She seems to have lightened
up a new light in my heart, the fire of hope, of love, of strength for
me to keep going to the rest of my life. I am not young to express my
love like when I was with my first love, without any denial, I also
miss my wife from time to time, and it was already a beautiful
memorable one anyway. But I can't help admitting the colleague I
mentioned was you that came and kept away all the shadows of
loneliness. I was afraid sometimes that these words of mine could
upset you and if they did, I truly appologize. But without you, the
rest of my life is just a wreck.

With sincerity and all from the bottom of my lonely heart

Jong

hey man£¡ what do you want to do£¿:)
 
J

jong4gorgon

hey manï¼ what do you want to do?:)- Hide quoted text -

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I post just to say thanks for your question, I am truly grateful for
that and everything.
To Mrs Gorgon, I do understand how bad it is when people try to
practice coupling forcefully, I hope Mrs Gorgon will not get angry if
she actually doesn't have a feel for Jong. But if she finds it alright
since she knows better the situation, then it's fine, please take this
as just a nonsense joke.

Again thanks everyone for reading
 

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